Fall Writing Frenzy

Happy Fall! Fall is pumpkins, apples, leaves, and writing contests of course. Below is my entry to the Kidlit Fall Writing Frenzy. For more information head over to https://mathiseverywhere439319476.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/official-kidlit-fall-writing-frenzy-contest-submission-page-2019/

My submission, Leafy Lane, is a BB/PB entry inspired by image 1 and is 53 words.

Leafy Lane

One leaf smusher

all alone.

Crunch!

Crunch!

Then…

Two leaf clompers.

Crunch!

Shuffle, shuffle

Chrunch!

Shuffle, shuffle

“Hi.”

“Hi.”

Side by side.

Crunch!

Shuffle, shuffle.

Crunch!

Shuffle, shuffle.

Friends?

Crunch!

Shuffle, shuffle

Giggle, giggle

Snicker

‘You count?”

“I’ll hide!”

Crunch!

Shuffle, shuffle

Swish, swish, swish

Kick,

Swish,

Shuffle,

Whee,

Crunch.

Friends!

14 thoughts on “Fall Writing Frenzy

  1. Excellent use of sparse language and letting the reader fill in the details. That adds to a reader’s engagement. One of the most original and kid-like I’ve read. Bravo.

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