Happy Fall! Fall is pumpkins, apples, leaves, and writing contests of course. Below is my entry to the Kidlit Fall Writing Frenzy. For more information head over to https://mathiseverywhere439319476.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/official-kidlit-fall-writing-frenzy-contest-submission-page-2019/
My submission, Leafy Lane, is a BB/PB entry inspired by image 1 and is 53 words.
Leafy Lane
One leaf smusher
all alone.
Crunch!
Crunch!
Then…
Two leaf clompers.
Crunch!
Shuffle, shuffle
Chrunch!
Shuffle, shuffle
“Hi.”
“Hi.”
Side by side.
Crunch!
Shuffle, shuffle.
Crunch!
Shuffle, shuffle.
Friends?
Crunch!
Shuffle, shuffle
Giggle, giggle
Snicker
‘You count?”
“I’ll hide!”
Crunch!
Shuffle, shuffle
Swish, swish, swish
Kick,
Swish,
Shuffle,
Whee,
Crunch.
Friends!
Monica Acker 
Great job! I love all the sounds.
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Love it, Monica! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Fun use of onomatopoeia!
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Excellent use of sparse language and letting the reader fill in the details. That adds to a reader’s engagement. One of the most original and kid-like I’ve read. Bravo.
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Wow! Thank you!
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Aww what a sweet friendship story! Fun onomatopoeia, too! Thanks so much for sharing and entering the Fall Writing Frenzy!
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Thanks for running the contest!
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You’re very welcome! ❤️
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This is so adorable! It made me smile and envision the fall setting:)
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Thanks 😊
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Wow! Thank you!
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